Sinner

[Sinner]

your name:Sinner

other characters RPed on DRA:Eragon


character:

name: Sinner

age: 14 yrs.

gender: Male

race:Human

allegiance: none yet

description:He is a short boy with long rough looking black hair that hangs to his shoulders. His eyes are a fierce red and a large flame shaped scar is over his right eye yet his eye remains fine. He wears a black muscle -T and black jeans. Most of the time he is barefoot. All in all his features are very dark and sinister showing exactly how he is on the inside.
A thick chain is tight on his neck and cannot be removed without him losing his neck in return. A lighter chain hangs attached on his pocket and up onto the top of his pants. He does have sabers and fangs yet no one really knows why.

personality: Sinner is someone who would sit in a field and cackle at another's death. He only talks to those who he finds fit. Heart seems to be an empty shell that merely keeps him alive having basically no feelings of guilt, sorrow, or love.

Love............a feeling Sinner has never experienced. Hatred is a close friend of his making him cold. Cackles rise deep within feeling a sinister joy at another's pain. Many don't like him and simply look upon him as a danger put on earth by an unearthly devil. Which gave him the name of Sinner. Truly he is a disturbing being from the depths of hell.

history: Abandoned at a young age Sinner started off with a bad start. His father was murdered after killing several of the King's men and attempting to assasinate the king. His mother on the other hand was kind and light hearted. Sinner always looked down upon her as a mere woman put here to continue the lines of his father. His family lived in hiding though to try and allow his family tree to grow and thrive.

One day though a squad of the King's officials came and savagly attacked the small family. Quickly Sinner had killed many but a strong blast of fire hit him in the face leaving a scar around his left eye. After a few moments though he sprang forth and delivered the fatal bite to the man. Last of his family he lives without anyone knowing he is there. Few notice him and even fewer are able to talk to him with him responding. He is a threat to all though making him feared and hated.

family: all deceased

rp sample: Silent footsteps sounded in the air. Unable to be heard they couldn't detect the man's presence. Red eyes scanned the few humans judgingly. "What a pity.....they have no worth yet to amuse me for a short period." His thoughts were in a sighing tone plain and a mere monotone. Suddenly a man grew alert and turned to where Sinner was. "Looks like I've been spotted," he thought slipping from the shadows.

Smirk slid onto his features scar lit by the light from the fire. Sabers were revealed more from the curl of the lip and the men stood there unable to talk. Red eyes flamed evily as he leapt forward meeting a man's blade with his own. Sinner might be small in size yet he was quick and deadly. He slid down swinging his blade upward in a quick thrust sinking it into the man's chest. Quickly he turned and sprang upon the others. When he was done all three lay dead and Sinner threw water upon the fire. "See you in hell!" Lyrics came with a sinister laughter as he disappeared.

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(I took tidbits from my other carry and put them with him. Basically he is just going to be a fun charrie for me to play ^_^ nothin important)

[shana]

Please note that this character couldn't exist.

The Raz'ac human mix is impossible, because the Ra'zac and lethrblakas only remain with 2 of each. It couldn't exist before the Ra'zac were wiped out, because that was a good 100 years ago. So, that means that either the female or male lethrblaka was it's parent. I can't speak for the female one, but the lethrblaka's hate humans. Humans were the main part of wiping them out, as well as the elves. So why would one breed with them? Apart from that, we have to talk about how you can't be half of just any creature.
Mothers protect their babies (Assuming they are mammals), inside their body. The Ra'zac, I do believe, are either reptiles or amphibians, as they don't have most of the factors needed for a mammal. As it's obvious enough mammals can't interbreed with reptiles/amphibians, I will assume for your sake it's a mammal.
The mother's body would still destroy the foreign tissue of the Ra'zac child. Or, if the mother was the lethrblaka, once again the human tissue would be destroyed by the blood cells. Why? Because the species are no where even close to being able to interbreed. For example. Tigers and lions could interbreed, as they are both big cats; therefore they are relatives of each other I guess. Ra'zac and humans have one thing in common. They're both humanoids. That's it. Not to mention how (If the mother was human) they would birth a Ra'zac, when they are born with thick shells.
So honestly, this whole mix is impossible. It wouldn't happen, both for scientific and personal reasons.

To elaborate, dogs and wolves could interbreed. Humans and monkeys could interbreed. But saying a human could interbreed with a Ra'zac is like saying a human could interbreed with a toad.

[Sinner]

mk I'll just have him be human than ^_^

[§Murtagh§]

I've never seen a human with red eyes...unless you count that albino monk in The DaVinci Code...but you didn't say that your character was an albino. Could you just change that bit? Also, I don't believe they have jeans and t-shirts in Alagaësia...You might want to change that as well. Other than that it looks good. Creepy person...but good. Also the fangs? On a human? No-no.

[Howl Wilde]

Human albinos have blue or grey eyes, I think.

[§Murtagh§]

Well then...they got the DaVinci Code wrong then...Either way, he wouldn't have red eyes.

[Arry]

*coughle* Just to add, XD Human Albinos have pink eyes. Albino's are born without pigment, so their skin is very pale, as is there hair. And since their eyes have no pigment they are pink XP I'll go look it up on Wiki to make sure.


Indeed, Very creepy guy.

[§Murtagh§]

Pinkish-red...it's all the same color...

[Howl Wilde]

Checked. Most types of albino have blue or pale grey eyes, with the occasional pink or purple eye depending on the amount of non-melanin in the iris, but that're pretty rare.

[Rider]

Albinos have pink eyes. ^_^

[Howl Wilde]

For freak's sake, humans don't have pink eyes, not usually - even albino humans don't tend to have pink eyes. Blue, hazel or grey, perhaps faintly purple tinted. Futhermore, if he's got 'albino eyes' he'd be partly or mostly blind.

[§Murtagh§]

Okay, enough with the albino eye color already! xD This is getting slightly off-topic. Let's just try to keep it to critiquing Sinner's bio. Thanks.

[Sinner]

*sighs* I give up on Sinner. Let's just delete all this ok? I'm getting tired of hearing all this albino stuff and he's got to be changed to much for my liking. Maybe I'll try again further on.

[Howl Wilde]

Don't be put out! At least we was only 'plaining about the red eyes, not making you feel like sh'te over your writing.

[Sinner]

you didn't I'm just lazy ^^