Post by _/Nienna\_ on Feb 13, 2007 22:24:10 GMT -5
your name:
Display Name:_/Nienna\_
Username: error
other characters RPed on DRA:
None...yet
character:
name:
Nienna
age:
18
gender:
Female
race:
Half human-half elf
allegiance:
Independent, because she doesn't agree with the Varden's tactics, yet doesn't like the Empire either.
description:
Nienna is about 5' 8" and 130 pounds. She normally wears informal type gametes, because she doesn't think formality in clothing is ever needed. Her hair is dark brown, with an exotic wave to it. Normally, Nienna wears it up in either something resembling a bun, or ponytail. When the hair is free, it rests just below her shoulders, and has some choppy bangs, that rest at about eye level. Her eyes strongly contrast her hair, with an ice blue, that has been said to look like a vortex . Her eyes are almond shape, and give her face a very proportional look to it.
Her skin has a nice healthy tan to it, giving her an exotic look. Hanging across her back, is a mean blade that she had made by a little known black smith. This black smith was killed only a few weeks after he made her this blade, making even more valuable. The edge of the knife was crafted from melted down elvish blades, that the black smith had acquired on is travels. The hilt itself had an overall reddish hue, contrasting from the leather black handle, which had formed to her hand, from tons of use. In her right boot, a small dagger lays, within a pocket she added to the boot. The dagger had a deep blood color hilt, and a black handle, matching her sword. Both weapons were from the same black smith.
Normally, Nienna is dressed in brown slacks, her black, overused, black boot resembling, shoes, and her shirts range from sleeveless to long sleeve.
personality:
Nienna is slightly bolder, then most. She tends to confront problems, before they confront her. Avoiding other's questions is another major part of her personality. Since her history is so dark, and polluted, she doesn't like others knowing about it. In short, Nienna keeps to herself, unless provoked.
When [and if] she finally opens up to you, she shows has a morbid sense of humor, that some are disgusted by, while others can't stop from laughing. When she finally does get close with someone, she stands by his or her side, no matter what. She is a devoted friend. Nienna also occasionally tries to be optimistic, but she has met several occasions, when there was no hope, therefore her 'optimism' was damaged. Another thing about Nienna is that she is very strong willed. Basically, she doesn't give up on much.
history:
Nienna was born when her mother and father weren't getting along. Her mother and father lived together in a house just outside of Teirm. All her memories growing up were of them bickering, and sometimes taking it out on her. At the age of 15, her father joined up with the Empire, and her mother left him for the Varden. Each side promising their daughter would join.
One horrid day, both Varden people, and Empire people, came to bring her to their home bases. In the morning, a Varden scout arrived at the door, and searched the premise for Nienna. She avoided his view, by constantly moving. While he was still looking for her, the Empire scout arrived. Nienna, then, equipped herself with her weapons, and slipped out of the house. Before she was off the premise, she spotted something out of the corner of her eye.
Father? Before she could respond to the sight of her father, and arrow was embedded through his heart. Nienna, saw, behind her father's corpse, stood her mother. Her mother had a bow, which she was just now lowering. A rush of air come over Nienna's other shoulder, where the Empire scout had fired another arrow. Killing her mother. The scout charged at young Nienna, and then everything went black.
Nienna awoke in an alien place. Her weapons gone. She jumped to her feet, feeling a rub had been cracked. Moaning, she looked around, and saw that she was in a jail cell...probably somewhere in Empire territory.
Nienna, unable to escape, lead the people who were making her 'Empire worthy', to believe that she was completely on their side. Before long, they had let her out, and get hold of her weapons. She then escaped, as fast as she could. Because she then did not have a horse, she ran, ending up in a city she did not recognize. Nienna explored the small town, befriending an old black smith, who took her as an apprentice. He built special weapons for her, and was basically her father, until a Varden spy tracked her down, and killed the poor man. Completely distraught, Nienna fled the town, taking all her honed skills with her.
Using the money she had saved over the few years she lived with the man, she bought a reliable horse, in the next town over. That horse, she named Nadé.
Now, she wanders the land, trying to avoid the eyes of both the Varden and the Empire.
family:
Mother: Elf: Rienz Prolien-diseased
Father: Human: Trick Lossëhelin-diseased
Other family: Unknown.
other:
Horse: Nadé [Nay-duh]
rp sample:
'Deep breath...stay awake...deep breaths...'
Nienna had been caught up to by some Empire scouts. They recognized her appearance from what they had been told, and attacked her. She had taken the first two, easy, but hadn't seen the third one coming. The man, who couldn't have been much older than her, hand shot her in the shoulder with an arrow. In response, she had struck his face with her sword.
Now, she lay, with her back against a tree. The wound was still bleeding, and the effects were starting to take their tole on her. The world around her was blurring, and starting to move with strange patterns. Frustrated, Nienna grabbed her bag, and ripped a shirt up, and used it as a bandage, after removing the evil arrow. Pushing herself to her feet, and single thought made her lean on the tree for support.
'Nadé?'
She hadn't thought of the horse since she dismounted to attack the intruders. As fear for her only friends safety ebbed within her, she began to sneak around the forest.
"Nadé?" she called, only as loud as she dared.
"Nadé?!"
Her calls became more frantic, as she began to wonder if there might have been four Empire troops, instead of three. Something behind her moved. Quickly, she turned around, with her sword drawn. In front of her, stood the black majestic creature, that she called Nadé. He let out a happy call, on the site of his owner. Nienna smiled and hugged the horses neck. They retreated to her bag, and she fed her friend an apple, that she carried for the occasion. As the horse happily ate it, she remounted him, and readied herself.
"Let's go to the river, Nadé." she whispered, "It's far enough away from here...that I don't think they'll find us...we'll camp there."
The horse whinnied, and began to gallop toward the location, as Nienna tapped her heels to his sides.
She let her body go with the horse, yet felt the throb of her shoulder, every time Nadé's hoof slapped the ground.
Display Name:_/Nienna\_
Username: error
other characters RPed on DRA:
None...yet
character:
name:
Nienna
age:
18
gender:
Female
race:
Half human-half elf
allegiance:
Independent, because she doesn't agree with the Varden's tactics, yet doesn't like the Empire either.
description:
Nienna is about 5' 8" and 130 pounds. She normally wears informal type gametes, because she doesn't think formality in clothing is ever needed. Her hair is dark brown, with an exotic wave to it. Normally, Nienna wears it up in either something resembling a bun, or ponytail. When the hair is free, it rests just below her shoulders, and has some choppy bangs, that rest at about eye level. Her eyes strongly contrast her hair, with an ice blue, that has been said to look like a vortex . Her eyes are almond shape, and give her face a very proportional look to it.
Her skin has a nice healthy tan to it, giving her an exotic look. Hanging across her back, is a mean blade that she had made by a little known black smith. This black smith was killed only a few weeks after he made her this blade, making even more valuable. The edge of the knife was crafted from melted down elvish blades, that the black smith had acquired on is travels. The hilt itself had an overall reddish hue, contrasting from the leather black handle, which had formed to her hand, from tons of use. In her right boot, a small dagger lays, within a pocket she added to the boot. The dagger had a deep blood color hilt, and a black handle, matching her sword. Both weapons were from the same black smith.
Normally, Nienna is dressed in brown slacks, her black, overused, black boot resembling, shoes, and her shirts range from sleeveless to long sleeve.
personality:
Nienna is slightly bolder, then most. She tends to confront problems, before they confront her. Avoiding other's questions is another major part of her personality. Since her history is so dark, and polluted, she doesn't like others knowing about it. In short, Nienna keeps to herself, unless provoked.
When [and if] she finally opens up to you, she shows has a morbid sense of humor, that some are disgusted by, while others can't stop from laughing. When she finally does get close with someone, she stands by his or her side, no matter what. She is a devoted friend. Nienna also occasionally tries to be optimistic, but she has met several occasions, when there was no hope, therefore her 'optimism' was damaged. Another thing about Nienna is that she is very strong willed. Basically, she doesn't give up on much.
history:
Nienna was born when her mother and father weren't getting along. Her mother and father lived together in a house just outside of Teirm. All her memories growing up were of them bickering, and sometimes taking it out on her. At the age of 15, her father joined up with the Empire, and her mother left him for the Varden. Each side promising their daughter would join.
One horrid day, both Varden people, and Empire people, came to bring her to their home bases. In the morning, a Varden scout arrived at the door, and searched the premise for Nienna. She avoided his view, by constantly moving. While he was still looking for her, the Empire scout arrived. Nienna, then, equipped herself with her weapons, and slipped out of the house. Before she was off the premise, she spotted something out of the corner of her eye.
Father? Before she could respond to the sight of her father, and arrow was embedded through his heart. Nienna, saw, behind her father's corpse, stood her mother. Her mother had a bow, which she was just now lowering. A rush of air come over Nienna's other shoulder, where the Empire scout had fired another arrow. Killing her mother. The scout charged at young Nienna, and then everything went black.
Nienna awoke in an alien place. Her weapons gone. She jumped to her feet, feeling a rub had been cracked. Moaning, she looked around, and saw that she was in a jail cell...probably somewhere in Empire territory.
Nienna, unable to escape, lead the people who were making her 'Empire worthy', to believe that she was completely on their side. Before long, they had let her out, and get hold of her weapons. She then escaped, as fast as she could. Because she then did not have a horse, she ran, ending up in a city she did not recognize. Nienna explored the small town, befriending an old black smith, who took her as an apprentice. He built special weapons for her, and was basically her father, until a Varden spy tracked her down, and killed the poor man. Completely distraught, Nienna fled the town, taking all her honed skills with her.
Using the money she had saved over the few years she lived with the man, she bought a reliable horse, in the next town over. That horse, she named Nadé.
Now, she wanders the land, trying to avoid the eyes of both the Varden and the Empire.
family:
Other family: Unknown.
other:
Horse: Nadé [Nay-duh]
rp sample:
'Deep breath...stay awake...deep breaths...'
Nienna had been caught up to by some Empire scouts. They recognized her appearance from what they had been told, and attacked her. She had taken the first two, easy, but hadn't seen the third one coming. The man, who couldn't have been much older than her, hand shot her in the shoulder with an arrow. In response, she had struck his face with her sword.
Now, she lay, with her back against a tree. The wound was still bleeding, and the effects were starting to take their tole on her. The world around her was blurring, and starting to move with strange patterns. Frustrated, Nienna grabbed her bag, and ripped a shirt up, and used it as a bandage, after removing the evil arrow. Pushing herself to her feet, and single thought made her lean on the tree for support.
'Nadé?'
She hadn't thought of the horse since she dismounted to attack the intruders. As fear for her only friends safety ebbed within her, she began to sneak around the forest.
"Nadé?" she called, only as loud as she dared.
"Nadé?!"
Her calls became more frantic, as she began to wonder if there might have been four Empire troops, instead of three. Something behind her moved. Quickly, she turned around, with her sword drawn. In front of her, stood the black majestic creature, that she called Nadé. He let out a happy call, on the site of his owner. Nienna smiled and hugged the horses neck. They retreated to her bag, and she fed her friend an apple, that she carried for the occasion. As the horse happily ate it, she remounted him, and readied herself.
"Let's go to the river, Nadé." she whispered, "It's far enough away from here...that I don't think they'll find us...we'll camp there."
The horse whinnied, and began to gallop toward the location, as Nienna tapped her heels to his sides.
She let her body go with the horse, yet felt the throb of her shoulder, every time Nadé's hoof slapped the ground.
Any way...This is a lovely biography, I simply love it. Apart from the few grammatical errors that I found, I do not really see anything quite wrong with it. I'm just wondering, For a 5'8 woman, who's worked in a forgery going to be that skinny? I'm really bad on these interpretations because I too am having the same problem xD Yet she's half elf so she should be slender. Yet let's just keep what she has for now xD
