|
Post by [ a.r.y.a ] on Feb 23, 2007 17:10:24 GMT -5
your name: other characters RPed on DRA: Hmm... Not that I know of. ^^
character:
name: Arya Dröttningu
age: Approximetly 100 years of age
gender: Female
race: Elf
allegiance: Varden, Elves
description: Perfectly toned features, Arya is strong and willing. She can sprint at immortal rates, and is a quite skilled swords-woman, and she is also skilled in using the bow and magic. Her long, ebony locks always seem to shine against nearly any bit of light. Her facade is free of any blemishes or freckles. Her distinctive, green eyes tell her life story.
Arya is built quite tall and slim, and she also has long black hair that is usually worn straight down. Her skin is smooth and evenly toned. Her ears are pointed like all people of the elven race, and she usually dresses in comfortable clothing. Upon her right shoulder, she has the Yawe tatooed in indigo ink.
personality: If anyone had to describe Arya in one word, that word would most likely end up being 'brave.' She is the one who was the egg courier when she was delivering Saphira's egg from the Varden to the elves, and the one who successfully aided Eragon while fighting Durza.
She can tend to be quiet and shy sometimes, but then again, she can also be a willing warrior. She stands up for anything and everything she believes in, and never gives up on hope.
She can be extremely serious with various matters, and rarely laughs. She often lurks within the shadows, and doesn't say much unless spoken to directly.
history: Arya is first introduced as the egg courier charged with the task of delivering a Dragon's egg from the Varden—an organization fighting against the Empire—to the Elves. Her mother, the Queen of Elves, Islanzadí, regrettably sent her to do this task.
Evandar, Arya's father, became King and married an Elf princess, Islanzadi, who gave birth to Arya. Evandar died at the hands of either Galbatorix or one of the Forsworn about 100 years ago or less, and his queen has ruled since.
She is of royalty, but she does not yet willingly reveal that to many...
family:
Mother: Queen of Elves, Islanzadi Father: King of Elves, Evandar (descended)
Siblings: There are currently no known siblings of Arya
Grand Mother: Former Queen of Elves, Dellanir (descended) Grandfather: Unknown
other: *bounces up and down* Word is that people believe that in the next Inheiritence book, that Arya will be a dragon rider! O.o I'm so anxious...
rp sample:
[Ok, this is based on if Arya does become a dragon rider... :P I made up the dragon's name, and... Um... Yea... lol]
Arya gazed down below at the terrain below her, Aiedail's massive wings beating a rythmic tune as they traveled greater and greater leangths. It has been so long since they have been able to take a peacefull soar accross Ellesméra together... Her flowing ebony locks billowed behind her as they took up more speed, and a gentle grin appeared upon Arya's facade.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A Few Hours Later - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
She gently spoke to Aiedail through her mind, Gánga. Back. Shortly after the gentle command she had given her, Aiedail angeled her left wing downward, causing them to turn around in a circle. Once they had reversed their course, she continued on with a quickend pace. Aiedail knew the way home just as well as Arya, and she did not require any directions given. She began to do somewhat of a spiral downward as they prepared for landing, and Arya's thighs clenched tightly to the saddle in order to hold on.
Once Ellesméra came into sight, Aiedail stopped spiralling once she was low enough to the soils. Eventually, she began to outstreatch her wing span to greater leangths to slow down their landing rate. Her claws extracted outward as they reached for the warm soils. Aiedail took a few extended steps forward before coming to a halt.
For a moment, Arya stroked her golden scales, admiring how the sun caused Aiedail's peltage to seem to sparkle. She smiled to herself before dismounting.
[So sorry, but my muse has seemed to of dissappeared... O.o]
|
|
|
Post by §Murtagh§ on Feb 23, 2007 17:19:31 GMT -5
Your description needs to be a lot longer, and your personality doesn't really tell a whole lot about her? She's generally quiet, so you might want to add that. She's very serious and rarely laughs. Stuff like that. Also, your history/family details are taken nearly word-for-word from Wikipedia. You need to write on your own what you think happened in her life previously up until now (at the point where Eragon finds Saphira's egg). If all you can find is that her family was royalty, and that she was a dragon courier, then add stuff around that.
Also, Arry's character Nostariel has already been chosen to be the Rider of the green dragon, and on here, all RP's need to be written in third person ["Arya walked through the woods," instead of "I walked through the woods."]. After you have modified all of that, I will look at this again.
|
|
|
Post by [ a.r.y.a ] on Feb 23, 2007 17:24:20 GMT -5
*salutes* Will do! *waddles off to edit post*
|
|
|
Post by Arry on Mar 1, 2007 17:20:42 GMT -5
I'm sorry to inform you, After much debating of our staff. That this application has been
Please don't take offense to it, We had many applications for this particular character. Please try to make another application either for your own made up character or another canon if you chose. Again, Dearly sorry. If you have any questions on this decision or other such matters feel free to PM one of the staff.
Your Loyal Co-Admin,
~Arry
|
|